Woven Wool

September 16th, 2008 admin Leave a comment Go to comments

Woven Wool

Mountain Woven Million Dollar Advertisement

You may have heard of an ad that ran 65 years ago with the headline:

"Hand Woven by the Mountain People of New Mexico"

New Christmas Patterns in these unique ties. Wearers say an exceptional value. Sold only direct from weavers to you.

It was a one-page ad that ran in the November 1940 edition of Life. Simple - copy intensive - with a picture of the ties.

Get this: that ONE AD SOLD 26,000 TIES!

An amazing success story. And an amazing ad (written by James W Young).

What is most evident about the ad is the unique ways they use a number of great advertising techniques - ones that STILL work today just as well.

Think about this:

1) A unique headline - "mountain people" conjures up pictures with those two words. "Hand woven" portrays the quality that they put into the ties. Combined, this is a very intriguing headline.

2) In the subhead, this statement is interesting - "Wearers say an exceptional value.*" Note that the references a footnote at the bottom of the ad that is actually a testimonial of a happy buyer.

George W Engelmann, well known Chicago business man, writes: "Enclosed is my order for some of your ties. I would like to take this opportunity to tell you how well I like your ties. When I wear them they never fail to attract favorable comment. They are also the most durable ties and best value I have ever seen"

NOTE: a testimonial in a clothing advertisement! How often do you see that? 65 years later and few people are using this simple strategy. The footnote is a nice touch - very interesting way to get people involved in the ad.

Also note how the testimonial is written. Chances are the adman wrote the testimonial and had the client approve of it. In your business you should do the same. Your clients will provide glowing testimonials but (typically) have a tough time saying the best things about your business and how those things affect other potential buyers. This testimonial touches on "here is another order" "they attract favorable attention" "durable" "best value" "well know business man" All of that in a couple short sentences!

3) The ad starts out with a very compelling story: "For over 200 years the Spanish people who settled New Mexico have been raising sheep and weaving wool. Their looks have been handed down from father to son....."

And on it goes into the story of where they live, the types of fabric they make, the colors, the make of the tie, intriguing features like "invisible silk", how they wear, wrinkle free, the textures, cleaning... and so on.

It literally forces you to read the entire story!

Then it goes into "My Christmas Offer" showing that they obtained a fantastic deal ($1 per tie) - makes the perfect gift - guaranteed.

How to order details are very intricate - making sure people know exactly what must be done to get a part of this special offer. It is even discussed how they will be packaged so the customer knows what to expect in their mailbox.

Last, the true kicker: why they MUST order now - "before the Spanish go on their El Natividad" and why you must make a decision now before Christmas gets here and your gift is late.

What an amazing ad. And, there is absolutely no reason you can't use a concept like this in November for your year end specials. Either you sell products or services that make a good gift - or it is the perfect time in the New Year to order a new model.

Find a way to use these ideas:

*Intriguing headline - make it a visual one

*Testimonials

*A great story about you - your employees - your spouse - your kids - your pets - whatever, just make it interesting

*Descriptive on what they get and why it matters

*A very special offer that WILL NOT be repeated

*Make it descriptive on how to order (and give them options)

*The big reason why they MUST order now!

*Tie it in to a holiday or special theme

Not rocket science - but if they can sell 26,000 neck ties with an ad like this - don't you think you could find a way to sell more of your products and services using similar techniques?

You could if you try!

About the Author

Troy White, The Marketing Results Mentor and Expert Copywriter helps clients achieve HUGE growth surges in their business in very short periods of time. If you're an entrepreneur in need of quick cash flow surges ' here is the quick-hit solution to put money in your bank.... The Wild West Wealth Summit! Make sure you visit http://www.WildWestWealth.com or sign up for the Free Cash Flow Surge Newsletter at http://www.CashFlowSurges.com